Geralda Gjergjaj
Composition#9 draft#2
Dec 6, 2009
Dear Mr. Mayor
Recently I read in the news paper that you want to improve the family’s life who has small children. I know that you have two options and you have to choose the one that it’s going to improve the family life better. I believe that a free day care would be a terrific idea because small children need to be in good and safe hands. If you decide to afford free day care you will help families to save some money, you will give a chance to new teachers begging working, and you will increase the education.
One of the biggest problems and especially in the United States is small children because parents need to work and they can’t because of their children. Many parents are unable to work because they have to take care of their children, while they are little. This means that only one member of the family works (father or mother) and if they have many children it is difficult to handle it. A day care can help parents a lot because parents are going to send their children there and to save nine hours of work. By saving nine hours of work I mean that both of the parents can work and have more money on their saving account. Parents can relax their selves sometimes and some other important activities like going to bank, or shopping while their children are in day care. I believe that is going to help a lot the poor families because they really need help, and actually the poor families have more kids than they are supposed to have. New York city Is the city with the biggest population so I believe that day cares are so important and not only for the poor people but also for rich people.
Dear Mr. Mayor don’t you think that many people with diplomas from college they don’t have a job because of the bad economy? The biggest problem in the whole world is the economy. Thousands of people their graduate from college but they didn’t find a job about their major. They working in another jobs and this is unfair because they were studying from years and after their graduation they couldn’t found a job. In the day cares you can hire many teachers who can help the kids, they can watch them, play with them and do many activities with them. Day care is nine hours so of course you have to hire many people to work in the kitchen and many cleaners. Kids are going to stay long time in the day care so they have to eat over there. Automatically they need some cookers and some people to help in the kitchen. Also in a day care need to hire people to clean because of many illness and jams. Especially little kids need more protection from adults or teens. The cleaners have to clean almost twice per day because is more healthy for little kids. Day cares can provide many and different kind of jobs.
My last reason that I believe a day care can be a great opportunity for many people is that kids are going to grow up with manners. Is the best age to start building the personality of a child when the child is little, you can learn your kid by playing with him, and of course that the family is have to give good manners to their kids, but also teachers can learn kids what is good and what is not. Children can learn for a young age how to speak politely, and how to act. I believe that if you decide to the free day care many of those children can succeed in their lives, many of them can be good personalities and not spoiled or rude. It is better to give your kid some good manners and to learn him how to act with the people and the best age is when the kid is little because they can catch the meaning of the life fast, and of course when they are young they have a weak personality so you can help a kid build his/him personality with strong thoughts.
It is a great idea to improve the family’s life by offering free day care. It will increase the education, jobs, and of course some families can save some money for the future of their children. Some families need this kind of help because they don’t have enough money and they can’t work because they don’t have where to leave their children. A baby sitter is a good idea but some people don’t trust them and some people don’t have enough money to pay them.
Thank you for reading my paper
Sincerely ,
Geralda Gjergjaj