Perfect Paragraph

Geralda Gjergjaj

Composition #5 draft #1

Oct 15, 2009

Example paragraph

I admire Martin Luther King because he never gave up. First, he went in school that African-Americans had separated bathrooms and seats from the whites. He was born in one bad season that everyone was against black people. He did many marches to saw that black and white are the same. Second, I admire him because he enters college at age 16. He was a preacher at the same time as his father was. He always was a calm boy and he never fought with the people. The third reason is that he starts doing a boycott on the bus. In the past African Americans the wasn’t supposed to seat in the front of the bus only in the back and if they were seating in the back and one white person didn’t have a seat the African American had to give their seats or the bus driver was supposed to call the police. Whites were very racist and they looked Blacks suspiciously. So MLK decided to stop taking the bus until the rules is going to be equal for everyone and finally he won the boycott. Martin Luther King believed that in Conceivable future everything is going to be equal. MLK was a great fighter a great father and a great preacher, he was a significant person.